I think I was supposed to proof-read it again today, but I did...and I didn't find the errors I found yesterday. This either means I was really, really tired yesterday, so tired, in fact, that I started hallucinating errors where there were none. Or I'm still tired today. =w=
Anyways. Let me know if anything isn't clear, and I'll try my best to help.
Finished version: [link]
[APR-18-2012]: Ack! I completely forgot that I never linked to the ball-point pen brush for SAI. orz
For those who couldn't find it, here's the [link]
Sorry about that! ;A;